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Thursday, January 26, 2012
Jesus and The Doctor.
Yeats was an atheist who had been raised with a christian background, as we learned in class the other day. Therefore he would be familiar with Christian beliefs and 'lore', if you will. Since the majority of Europe was also well versed in christian 'lore', it would be a perfect subject to make a point with. For an atheist, the second coming would/will be a terrible time. Basically, this man, the "son of God", will drop out of the sky one day and take all of his friends out of the world, and then, quite literally, all hell breaks loose. While he is a savior to Christians, he will also be a harbinger of death to the rest of humanity.
I drew a big parallel here to the Doctor from the popular BBC show "Doctor Who". In the episodes "The Pandorica Opens" and "The Big Bang", the world's oldest and most secure prison in the world, a box hidden under stone henge called the "pandorica", is opening. The box is said to contain the most feared being in the universe--something so terrible that it could just drop out of the sky one day and rip apart entire civilizations. The Doctor willingly goes to try to stop whatever being is going to escape, only to find that it is a hoax. The pandorica is empty and all of the races he has ever thwarted in the past imprison him inside of it. This makes the viewers, and the Doctor, contemplate his actions over the course of the TV series. The Doctor always appears, makes friends and protects them, and stops evildoers. However, from the perspective of the evildoers, they are doing right and he is the evil one for thwarting their plans. He is the destroyer of worlds, usually for the common good, but he brings destruction nonetheless.
All of the same could be said about Christ and the second coming. I would draw the argument out even further, but I'm exhausted.
So, what did we learn this week? Ben will use any excuse to talk about Doctor Who? Nothing? The purpose of stonehenge is to hide the most secure prison ever? All good answers. Tune in next week… seriously, just do it.
P.S. I commented on Nick Hampton's "Poetry=Art"
The Second Coming [Again]
Musings at Midnight
In lines 401-422, T.S. Eliot’s way of closing out the poem intrigued me. “Datta, Dayadhvam, Damyata” mean “give, sympathise, control” as the handy footnotes explain. The lines that interest me most are 402-409:
“My friend, blood shaking my heart
The awful daring of a moment’s surrender
Which an age of prudence can never retract
By this, and this only, we have existed
Which is not to be found in our obituaries
Or in memories draped by the beneficent spider
Or under seals broken by the lean solicitor
In our empty rooms.”
I do not know for sure to what T.S. Eliot is referring, but I know in my own life this struck a chord. It reminded me of my relationship with God. The fearfulness when you are hesitating to surrender your whole life to Christ, then the daring when you decide (rationally or abruptly) to give Him complete control. In the world’s eyes this is foolish, and is seen as a rash act that no amount of rational recompense can retract. (alliteration=fun:]) However, these moments of surrender- bowing to God’s will- are the moments in which true joy and peace are experienced. These are that make life worth living. Yes, it’s dangerous and not advisable if you want a safe life, but this is when God is truly free to fulfill His purpose for you. These times of complete humility and brokenness before Christ, when He takes the broken vessel that is you and shapes it into something beautiful, and fills it with His power… these are important moments in your life; however, they rarely have any impact on those around you. It will not be something people write in your obituary, nor will it be a memory others have of you. It’s not something you can pass on to those left behind; it’s something truly personal- giving yourself to God.
The next two parts reflect this journey, I think. “Dayadhvam” is speaking of each person in his own chains (sympathizing with one another) but the key brings freedom. Then, “Damyata” is referring to a joyful and obedient vessel. So, surrender comes first, then freedom, and then because of that freedom we are to be obedient.
Mark 8:34 “If anyone would come after me, he must deny himself and take up his cross and follow me.”
So… surrender, exchange chains of sin for bondage to Christ, and obedience.
This was an amazing picture in my head that I did not expect to find in “The Waste Land.” Who knows, I might be reading it all wrong; I guess we’ll see in class tomorrow!
P.S. commented on Tori’s “Like a lost falcon”
Left with no hope......
The first stanza of Yeat’s Second Coming brings up a picture of man lacking something utterly important to his being – “The Falcon cannot hear the falconer.” Moreover, this imagery is carried throughout the rest of the stanza – examples of this include: the negative phrases “innocence is drowned,” “lack conviction;” and also the only “fullness” being attributed to those who are the “worst.” Through Yeats’ word choices, the reader begins to join in the story. Not only is he hearing of the falcon being without a falconer, but he himself beings to personally feel the inadequacy and incompleteness of the world that is being described.
Now, it is the beginning of the second stanza, Yeat’s is audience is left wondering. He must offer some resolution, so what does he do? This stanza brings up an idea normally associated with hope, the “second coming,” but instead of elevating such a thing as divine and resolute, instead of the great exuberance with which it began, the second stanza quickly fades into the despair of the first.
“Hardly are those words out/ When a vast image of Spiritus Mundi/ Troubles my sight…”
This idea of the second coming is fearful, it “troubles.” Moreover, the “beast” of the second coming has a stare just as merciless as the hopeless fate of the falcon in the first stanza.
So we now move into the third stanza. Now, there is some sort of resolution to these lines, but it is of a rather peculiar sort. The situation does not change, the stanza begins, “the darkness drops again..,” but the difference here is that the speaker now “knows.” Whereas the first two stanzas were “pitiless,” “blank,” “anarchy,” now there is some order coming into sight. The speaker sees the end of a previous age, the “twenty centuries” that were “vexed to nightmare by a mocking cradle” and the beginning of a new one, the age of the “rough beast.” It is interesting though the somber and almost gloomy tone which the author takes towards this beast, towards this ‘thing’ that is going to replace the old, anarchical, hopeless age. This beast does not swoop in, or overthrow, rather he (almost begrudgingly it would seem) “slouches toward Bethlehem to be born.”
Why is a slouching, rough, pitiless thing the only resolution offered in this poem? What is this beast?
I commented on Nick Hampton's "Poetry=Art"
Wednesday, January 25, 2012
Second Coming of What Exactly?
"A shape with lion body and the head of a man,
A gaze blank and pitiless as the sun,
Is moving its slow thighs, while all about it
Wind shadows of the indignant desert birds."
While reading this, I paused. My first thought was that Yeats had to be describing some type of beasts from Revelations or Daniel. Then I noticed though it was not describing, any one of those beasts. No this was a reference of description toward a Sphinx. (Lightbulb moment). The Sphinx in Egypt popped into my mind. Ok, so what does the Sphinx represent? Well, honestly I can't tell you exactly what it meant for ancient Egyptians...but I would like to take a crack at what it was. The Sphinx was a modern marvel and accomplishment for those ancient Egyptians. It was also was a suspected place of cultic solar worship.
With this I wondered if the beast in the poem could this represent the modern technology and false religions of Yeats day? Then after reading a few blogs from my colleagues, I felt maybe this beast represents humanity in whole. If it represents us in our corrupt immoral state, and what we have seemed to accomplish through all our modernity. The destruction and slaughter of ourselves. That we are the merciless beast bringing on the plagues and tribulations of the Second Coming upon ourselves. That we are bringing upon the end of the world possibly?
Maybe I'm off my rocker here (Which is highly possible lol). But this is what I took from the poem, or the most interesting parts.
So there it is, my first blog of the semester! Good luck everyone can't wait to see what this season brings!
P.S. commented on Kelsey Parrish's Post.
Comment on Bethan's
Sailing to Byzantium was my favorite too. I wish we would've had time to talk about it in class :( It made me dread growing old and becoming a cat lady. According to Yeats, the world believes that the young get to live life to the fullest while the elderly sit back and watch, longing to be youthful again. The thought of being "trapped inside a decaying body" is pretty depressing. No wonder the speaker wanted to leave a city filled with young people who reminded him everyday of what he could never be again!
break the chain
First I would just like to get a few things off my chest. I feel like as a class we have started out slow. I think we could all do a better job of opening up to Yeats and the upcoming wasteland. I know for me it was hard to get an idea of what the poem consisted of and felt somewhat limited to what I could take from class on tuesday. While for most of the class I felt as if we were going in circles, I do think towards the end of class we touched on a few main points. The idea of change, which is for the worst in Yeats' eyes, is apparent in that the normalcy of history has began to unravel. We can see from the transition of the poem that it is fluxuating to a point of instability. Hopefully, by not having a pretense of a certain background other than the one of Yeats, we can understand this poem that was written in a rather difficult time..
p.s I commented on anna rhodes post
Poetry=Art
Forgot to add whose post I commented onZZZ
Poetry: The Language of the Gods
“My nerves are bad to-night. Yes, bad. Stay with me. | |
Speak to me. Why do you never speak? Speak. | |
What are you thinking of? What thinking? What? | |
I never know what you are thinking. Think.” | |
I think we are in rats’ alley | 115 |
Where the dead men lost their bones. |
Ancient Egypt Rises Again?
Are full of passionate intensity.
When a vast image out of Spiritus Mundi
Troubles my sight: a waste of desert sand;
I have to wipe the dust off my PC.
I really enjoyed the debate or discussion (whichever is appropriate) that we had Tuesday. I had read The Second Coming beforehand, and as I was reading it, I found myself thinking, "Oh. I know exactly what this is about! I can tell what this is about merely by looking at the title! The Second Coming. The second coming of Christ. It doesn't take a genius to figure that out. Right?" Wrong. I go to class and the whole discussion drives me to different thoughts completely. I found myself thinking, "Welcome Back to Honors."
One thing that sparked my interest came in these lines of the poem :
The ceremony of innocence is drowned;
The best lack all conviction, while the worst
Are full of passionate intensity
This poem was written following WWI, however the words are true even today. Crime is radiating on the streets. There are murders, rapes, thefts, and all other sorts of misfortune happening in our world, our country, our states, and in our very cities. Sexual immorality is burned into the culture. Our innocence is "drowned". Then it goes back to the key lines. "The Best lack all conviction, while the worst are full of passionate intensity." We're allowing the stench of the world to roam and corrupt our habitats, yet the good people in the world are silent. The good people are comfortable with their laziness and lack of motivation. This brings me back to a revelation that I've had in the last couple of weeks.
Lately, I've been thinking about Christianity and how it has developed. This poem has only complemented what I've been thinking. 'The best lack all conviction." The "Modern-day Christian" (as I have come to call them) is comfortable with being dormant and without taking any action. We are called to "go and make disciples of all nations, baptizing them in the name of the Father and of the Son and of the Holy Spirit". Yet we have created our own doctrine. Instead of making disciples we have become satisfied with merely going to Church, reading the Bible when we feel guilty, and living a basically unchanged life. It also says in Ezekiel 18:30 that we should repent! And turn from all our transgressions, so iniquity will not be our ruin. we should cast away from all our transgressions, by which we have transgressed; and get a new heart and a new spirit.For God has no pleasure in the death of him who dies, so then we need to turn from ourevil ways and live!
We need to step out of our modern theological mold where culture has put us, and step up and be full of conviction and not have a lack of one! We should make an impact and a difference. Am I asking that everyone becomes a missionary? In a way yes. Mobile, Alabama is our mission field. Therefore, we need to go from our comfort zones and make disciples of the Lord.
This video is by Francis Chan and I watched it the other day and it only strengthened how I felt and it summarized my feelings perfectly. :) http://youtu.be/LA_uwWPE6lQ
The Second Coming... of war?
"I think we are in rats' alley
Where the dead men lost their bones."
Take from it what you will I loved these lines because I think it is a beautifully written metaphor about the state of man and depravity.
Commented on Jamie's post
Well....Here Goes The Plunge
"When a vast image out of Spiritus Mundi
Troubles my sight: a waste of desert sand;
A shape with lion body and the head of a man,
A gaze blank and pitiless as the sun,
Is moving its slow thighs, while all about it
Wind shadows of the indignant desert birds."
As soon as I read this, I stopped and looked up the name of whatever had the body of a lion and the head of a man. It pulled up the Sphynx. There are many different versions of the Sphynx in literature. In Greek mythology, the Sphynx guards the city of Thebes and people must answer a riddle in order to gain access into the city. If they answer incorrectly then the Sphynx eats them. Oedipus was the only man to ever solve the riddle. I did not think that this was the Sphynx that Yeats was referring to. I felt that he was talking about the Egyptian Sphynx. Especially since he was mentioning the sand in the line before. In Egypt, the Sphynx was built to represent the closeness of the pharoahs with their sun god. They were also guardians. Yeats seems to tie them together even more when he mentions how the Beast has a gaze that is pitiless like the sun. The only way I can link the Egypt idea with religion is the story of when Moses had to get his people out of slavery in Egypt from the Pharoah. I don't think I really know what I'm talking about honestly, but I feel like maybe Yeats is very fearful of the idea of a giant monster coming and killing everyone. But it feels very odd yet significant that the Beast is coming from Egypt.
P.S. I commented on Anna's, "An Unravelling and a Revelation."
An Unravelling and a Revelation
It’s blog time once more, and our class is once again delving into mysterious poetry. The Second Coming is to some degree a very mysterious poem. Perhaps that is what is so intriguing about it. My favorite part of the poem, and the part that I understood the most, was the first stanza. I believe most of the class would agree with me. There are some important cues to look at while reading the first stanza. It may not be as straightforward as we think. One dynamic of the poem that stands out is an overall unwinding of old and a prophecy of something new.
In class we talked about the gyre. It is a cone-like spiraling motion-- a ‘widening “ gyre. The part of the gyre to focus on is the part that is not compact and because it is widening it is getting weaker and weaker and further and further away from it’s starting point. In the next line the falcon is also getting further and further away from his starting point, the falconer. Once again we see a circling motion, and a widening as the falcon’s circles become so large he cannot hear the falconer. Later in the poem the word “loosed” is used twice. Over all in the first stanza, there is something that is being loosed. Things are beginning to unwind. The clockwork is over and things as they were before are quickly unraveling.
Something is indeed happening as told by the next three lines. The first line says, “Surely some revelation is at hand.” Don’t let the word revelation confuse you. Some revelation does not necessarily mean The Revelation we are familiar with found in the book of Revelation in the Bible. What if it is a different kind of revelation? What if Yeats is playing off the biblical references we know to symbolize a revelation he is introducing? Next the poem leads into the part about the sphinx. I do not fully understand what the sphinx means, but whatever it is, it represents the “revelation” at hand. Once again don’t get caught up in the use of the word beast. What if Yeats means a different kind of beast? After focusing on the sphinx it says, “while all about it / Reel shadows of the indignant birds.” Here again we can notice imagery of a circling motion.
P.S. I was unable to comment because of a glitch on Blogspot I think. I'll type comment.
A Disturbing Sight
Turn around and found the light lime...
Then it comes to be that the soothing light at the end of your tunnel
was just a freight train coming your way."
-Metallica, No Leaf Clover
It's good to be back on the Honors Blog, ain't it? Let's see what I've got to work with here...ooh, Yeats! I've heard good things about this guy. Let's see, The Second Coming, hm, sounds vaguely Christian. (Reads)...what is this I don't even...???? I don't need to drive this train of thought any longer, we all know how divisive this poem was and how we couldn't fully determine the meaning of this poem. Still, there is a certain theme I want to touch on that this poem brings on more than any other I've read-what if we want to come is actually not what we get at all?
It's happened to us all. You take a difficult test that we think deserves an A, but you end up with a C. You get tickets to see someone perfom live hoping for an amazing show, but for one reason another it totally sucks. Now take that and enlarge it over 9000 times...this is Yeat's reality.
Consider that Yeats was an Irishman writing during a time of intense holy war between the Catholics and Protestants, where he not only knew of the scriptures and our perception of the apocalypse but also saw religion in its most evil form. Consider that this poem was written right after World War I, in a time where people had been eagerly expecting the return of Jesus Christ. For some, the most terrifying war of all time surely meant that Jesus would be coming soon and end the madness. For the secular, this was surely the war to end all wars and utopia would surely be established. Others merely saw a return to peace and hoped for better days after the hell they just went through. Yeats didn't share their sentiments. Regardless of all the symbolism and allusions that may or may not be in this poem, one thing is certain...things are about to get very bad very soon. It is not a second coming of Christ, but a second coming of war! We are not heading upwards towards Utopia but downwards into something far more terrifying than we can imagine.
Now consider the global depression that the world fell into after the war, the rise of Hitler and Nazi Germany, the Holocaust, and, most notable considering the Sphynx allusion, the Six Day War on the newly reformed nation of Israel of which Egypt participated in and tell Yeats he's wrong. Yeah, poets are like that, which is why I say that the light at the end of the tunnel most Europeans were expecting turned out to be a freight train, "surely the Second Coming is at hand."
Anyway, that's just some food for thought, thanks for reading. Please feel free to comment as you please, I commented on Joshua's The Slouching World.
Yeats gives me the eats!!!
Anyways, of the three poems my favorite by far was Sailing to Byzantium, especially the first stanza. I also found this the easiest one to understand...or maybe I just got it all wrong.
My favorite lines of the poem are in the first stanza:
" Whatever is begotten, born, and dies.
Caught in that sensual music all neglect
monuments of unageing intellect."
From these lines, for me at least, I can really understand and empathize with the speaker's agony of old age. His yearning to find a way somehow to remain youthful really makes me see the desperation in being forgotten or left behind, which goes along with old age.
In the second stanza, the speaker goes on to say that:
" An aged man is but a paltry thing,
a tattered coat upon a stick, unless
Soul clap its hands and sing, louder sing"
This, too, makes me feel sad for the speaker. For it seems like he is trying to figure out how to live when he is "fastened to a dying animal" (his body). My own grandparents, at times, have expressed somewhat embarrassingly to me, the same sort of helplessness. In the mind, heart, and soul, they are still full of life and energy. Yet, they physically can not achieve what they want to because they are trapped in their own bodies.
The last stanza is my second favorite of the poem. In it, the speaker desires to be taken away from "any natural thing" and to basically be kept beautiful in what the speaker goes on to describe as a work of art I feel like. This part very much reminds me of Ode to A Grecian Urn where the two lovers are left suspended outside of time, untouched by old age and ugliness, where they always will remain youthful and beautiful. By desiring to be taken away from any natural thing, it seems as if the speaker almost wants to be something fake, artificial, which would keep his body from aging and becoming ugly.
Basically, this poem made me dread getting old and ugly and being forgotten. Lovely.
The Slouching World
Surely some revelation is at hand;
Surely the Second Coming is at hand.
Yeats, a non-Christian, does not use the Second Coming of Christ in a literal sense; rather, he uses it as symbolism for his primary audience, Christian Europe. The Second Coming is known as a cataclysmic event- the final chapter of history and the end of all things- and Yeats uses poetic imagery to describe it:
Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world,These lines are a commentary on the general state of man. Again, one should only consider the world in 1919: the nations were traumatized, and all that seemed to be good was overshadowed by war, pestilence and plague. As bad as the world seemed, it was but "mere anarchy," a shadow of things to come.
The blood-dimmed tide is loosed, and everywhere
The ceremony of innocence is drowned;
The best lack all conviction, while the worst
Are full of passionate intensity.
Yeats says that the best of men "lack all conviction" while the evilest "are full of passionate intensity." When good men lack the conviction to do good, they will not rise to stop those who are passionately intent on doing evil. Yeats read the times well, as it was this lack of conviction that would allow men like Adolf Hitler to come to power.
And what rough beast, its hour come round at last,
Slouches towards Bethlehem to be born?
It is not Christ who is slouching towards Bethelehem. It is us. We are the beast. According to Yeats, there is not an external doom coming to the world. The world is creating its own doom. We, humanity, will be the ones who destroy ourselves. The world is on the downgrade, continually slouching towards desolation and, ultimately, darkness.
EDIT: I commented on His Beloved's "Questions concerning 'The Second Coming'" and Mallory Searcy's "First post on the honor's blog."
Poetry
Yesterday in class, I found myself torn during the discussion on writing poetry instead of pros. I am pretty scientifically minded. I rather like bullet points and concise facts. I like things to be clear and plainly expressed. However, for some reason that I will never begin to be able to explain, I love poetry. Despite mystery and an unclear message, I have always enjoyed reading poetry, and even writing it (badly) on occasion. ”The best lack all conviction, while the worst/Are full of passionate intensity” just wouldn’t be as effective had Yeats said “Good people are lazy and bad people are motivated.”
Commented om "The End??"
-Jamie
Like a lost falcon...
"Turning and turning in the widening gyre,
The falcon cannot hear the falconer."
These first two lines immediately reminded me of the parable of the True Shepherd.
"The one who enters by the gate is the shepherd of the sheep. The gatekeeper opens the gate for him, and the sheep listen to his voice. He calls his own sheep by name and leads them out. When he has brought out all his own, he goes on ahead of them, and his sheep follow him because they know his voice." (John 10:2-4 NIV)
Yeats is saying that in the midst of the chaos of war Christians felt lost and out of touch with God. Like a falcon who could not hear directions from his master and didn't know which way to go or sheep without their shepherd, they forgot to put their trust in the True Shepherd. They lost sight of hope and neglected the One who gives us hope in times of trouble. But we don't have to be in the middle of World War to feel distant from God. It happens to all Christians during trying times in our own lives. We turn to other things to fill the void when we feel like God is silent, and this is when "things fall apart" and we experience "mere anarchy". But if we remain still long enough, we can hear the shepherd's soft whisper of encouraging words, guiding us through the gyre and back to safe ground.
-Tori Burger
Commented on Bethan's "Yeats gives me the eats"
Well, back into the fray!
Question's concerning "The Second Coming"
P.s I commented on Ajackson's post "The End??"
First post on the honor's blog
The End of My Life as I Know It, or Something Like That.
“Things fall apart; the centre cannot hold;/Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world,/The blood-dimmed tide is loosed, and everywhere/The ceremony of innocence is drowned;/The best lack all conviction, while the worst/Are full of passionate intensity.”
Friday marks the ending of my favorite television show. A show that has helped me through some incredibly hard times, including a move in the middle of my junior year in high school. And I feel exactly like the description above. Many people think I’m crazy for caring so much about a television show. But like I said, it has been one constant thing in my life for five years and now it won’t be there any longer. Actually, a more accurate representation of the way I feel is the first two lines of the poem, the ones directly preceding the ones I’ve quoted above. I feel like once the show is over, I will be flying high above the ground in ever widening circles until I can’t hear anything or anyone. I know this feeling won’t last long, probably not more than a day or two, but nevertheless, the feeling will be real.
Okay, I admit, I really don’t know what Yeats was trying to say. I also don’t know that we came to any sort of consensus about what the poem meant. And since I don’t understand poetry anyway, I thought it appropriate to try and relate my feelings to the surface level of a very confusing poem. Maybe next week I’ll understand the readings better and be able to actually write on those. I doubt it though.
Until next time,
Meghan
P.S. I commented on Rachel’s post and I would put the title of the post, but I can’t remember what it is, sorry.
Rebirth
Secularized Biblical faith
The End??
(haha! "edit post"-- marvelous button that is..) P.S. i commented on "Yeats gives me the eats!!!"
Tuesday, January 24, 2012
Many Different Meanings
Ps - This post was intended for Chloe R. post, but the blog would not let me comment on her post...
I agree we need to be seeking to share Christ with those who are lost and "make the most of every opportunity, however the bible says we are to anticipate and desire for the day of Christ's return. Having said that, it does not mean we need to stop being concerned for all those who are perishing, on the contrary, Jesus told us to "go make disciples of all the nations". We are suppose to care about the lost, one quote that I love that my pastors says (and I am sure other pastors as well) is how much do we have to hate someone to not tell them about Christ and let them go to hell not knowing if they have heard about Him before or not?(I am paraphrasing, he says it better, sorry) it is true though, how much do we have to hate someone to really not care about them going to hell, a lake of fire to burn forever?.?